page 2, “a furry experience throught a” -> “… through… ” or “within” or “via”
page 5, “the answers or not to these questions define the premise of the game” -> perhaps “the answers to these questions, or the lack of answers, will define the premise of the game”
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Typos/suggestions for the English version
page 2, “a furry experience throught a” -> “… through… ” or “within” or “via”
page 5, “the answers or not to these questions define the premise of the game” -> perhaps “the answers to these questions, or the lack of answers, will define the premise of the game”
page 10, “Strenght” -> Strength
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